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To what extent has the internet made life more convenient ? Give reasons for our answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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As the
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 has become more advanced, I believe the
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 has become the most widely used in human life.
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 with, people can purchase things online.
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 might be needed if we wanted the goods which are not available in the vicinity .
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, I had an experience when I needed to buy a book which was only available in the USA. Since that book was available on Amazon, without much consideration I bought it. The next reason is people can search the route online without having much time to go through a printed map. Google Earth has improved so much that it even captures the small roads. I remember when I needed to go to someplace where I had never gone before, so I read the route on that map the night before.
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 tool was very easy for me.
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, mobile banking enables people to transact anywhere and at any time. We just need to have a proper
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 connection and have a bank account. I can send money to my relatives in only 2 minutes at midnight.
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, with the use of the
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, I can have access to many courses on the education platforms. Unlike 10 years ago, the gate to knowledge can be opened with a few clicks.
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, I had a math course in Udemy, an online education platform, with only 10 bucks, and I still have access to it now. For these reasons, the
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 has improved our quality of life.It makes our life easier to buy things, to learn new knowledge, and to have a banking activity
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