in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for gevernments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is often argued that junk
food
is bad for your health as Use synonyms
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nourishment is processed and prepared with many chemical additives. Linking Words
This
essay agrees with charging people with a higher tax on fast Linking Words
food
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essay will discuss how imposing taxes has helped with Linking Words
another kind
of harmful products and Fix the agreement mistake
other kinds
secondly
, how Linking Words
this
approach could be a solution for obesity in some Linking Words
countries
.
The primary reason why I believe that fine companies that produce and sell highly processed Use synonyms
food
are an excellent way out is because Use synonyms
this
method has already worked out. In fact, in some Linking Words
countries
, including the UK, it has been seen that taxing other damaging goods, Use synonyms
such
as tobacco and alcohol, is lowering consumption. Linking Words
Furthermore
, northern Linking Words
countries
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for example
, Sweden and Denmark, are fining smokers, Linking Words
thus
governments should do the same with companies that sell fast Linking Words
food
.
Another reason why I agree with the statement is that only limiting the economic access to Use synonyms
this
kind of diet will reduce the usage by unprivileged households. Linking Words
Moreover
, beyond the health issue, eating junk Linking Words
food
is amplifying the percentage of obese people, who are straining the health care system in Use synonyms
countries
where it is free, Use synonyms
such
as Italy and Spain. Linking Words
Hence
, higher taxes could be a disincentive for obese people to keep on feeding themselves with Linking Words
this
kind of Linking Words
food
.
In conclusion, taking all points into consideration, I believe that Use synonyms
fining
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food
will be crucial not only for consumers but Use synonyms
also
in schools, in which growing children eat. Linking Words
Lastly
, the economic benefits are still outweighing the possible drawbacks.Linking Words
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