Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter • explain why you are writing • describe your circumstances • ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course

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Dear enrollment officer I hope
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letter finds you well. I have heard about computer classes which are held in your college recently.I am passionate about taking part in
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course. I have always been a big fan of computers and their related courses. But ,unfortunately, I have never had a chance to participate in them
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my personal issues. Actually, I did not finish my elementary course since over that period, I had to work for a long time to fund medical costs for my father. I understood
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elementary degree is necessary for being enrolled in
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class. I want to ask you, if it is possible, please let me participate in your class.
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, I promise you that I will take part in Non-attendance classes and
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my degree as soon as possible. I have spoken to an institute about
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degree and they accepted the situation. I do not want to miss your classes at all. I have heard about your excellent trainers and reputation. I am looking forward to your response. It is my pleasure that I have a chance to experience your fantastic computer courses. Sincerely M
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General
Proofread for minor grammatical and punctuation errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.
task achievement
Try to expand on your circumstances a little more, providing specific details about your passion and experience with computers.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to maintain clarity and coherence.
suitable writing tone
Clear and polite tone, appropriate for the context.
greeting and closing
Proper greeting and closing, making the letter seem professional.
logical structure
Logical structure allows the reader to follow the flow of ideas easily.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment officer
  • exception
  • self-study
  • passionate about computing
  • motivated
  • online resources
  • self-taught
  • related experience
  • future goals
  • assessment test
  • capabilities
  • proof of competency
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