some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particulat species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important envirnmental problems. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is a fact that are obliged to deal with many environmental obstacles. Many of them tend to believe that the most crucial of all problems, is the elimination of some animal and plant species,

while

some others accused that there are more essential problems corresponding to the environment. In

this

essay, I will demonstrate both aspects and place my thoughts about them.

Due to

some research, it can be clearly seen, that the extinction of some kind of flora and fauna is resulting in great negative issues.

For instance

, a disruption in the food chain might lead to excessive growth

in particular

species, leading to the proliferation of some infections. If,

for example

, there is an elimination of cats, that might result in an outgrowth of different reptiles, like rats and snakes.

Thus

, there will be a strike in typhus disease and many poisonous biting incidences for snakes, that might set humanity in danger.

In addition

, it has been proved, that trees tend to consume our CO2 and exchange it with O2.

In other words

, if there is a loss of trees

due to

excessive construction, that might lead to asphyxia , and even people need a supporting device to maintain their O2 levels. Despite

this

, others, myself included, claim that there are more harmful environmental issues. Indeed, our planet suffers from massive climate changes, affected by the greenhouse effect. Scientists prove that there is an obvious trend in temperatures, resulting in the melting of ice, in which

consequently

there is an increase in the sea level. If that happened,

then

some regions might get vanished from the global map. In my point of view, global warming

together with

climate change are in fact the most crucial environmental aspects that people have to deal with In conclusion,

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of animal species or plants

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has a great impact on the planet, but the greenhouse effect is way more important with much more negative results

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humanity, so

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worth giving attention to and trying to minimise it.