In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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as a solid tool for marketing to excel in the cut-throat competition in today's world.
Everyday they
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are trying to
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create
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something new or alter the formula or design to make their products more appealing and
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attracting
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to their consumers. In my viewpoint,
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agree that
this
has more negative impacts than positives. First of all, there are various plausible reasons behind
this
issue. Business is all about attracting their customers to
eliviate
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elevate
their income. In order to do that, they always come up with
latest
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the latest
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creation
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creations
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or
modyfying
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modifying
their old
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ones
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, which is not always a significant one.
For example
, Apple
company realse
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a new design of phone every year
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a high price demanding that every year there are some exclusive features included
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their competitors
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not have.
However
, in reality, there are a few changes in the design and style or
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maybe
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in features but the advertising
catch
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catches
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the
people
to buy the latest one.
Moreover
,
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toiletries
such
as soap, shampoo or perfume advertisement try to showcase something new in their ingredients, which their competitors
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not have, to make the customers purchase that
product
. There are
nevertheless
some drawbacks
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this
which
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will discuss now.
Firstly
, If a
product
is
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on the market for quite a few time and
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among
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people
,
by
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changing the style or ingredients might drop the quality
and
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apply
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which can cause a reduction in sales.
For instance
, Fair and
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cream was admired among young girls and ladies but when the ingredients changed with the new
packageing
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packaging
,
people
start
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started
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to avoid buying it as it was causing skin problems for some
people
.
Furthermore
, when the advertisement depicts that the
product
will work for many things and
people
buy it and it does not work,
people
can not trust
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that
product
or anything similar to that.
To conclude
,
avertising
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advertising
is an interesting
media
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medium
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to reach and connect with the customer and inform them about the products but businesses should provide true information so that they can keep their old customers and attract the new ones to trust them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • novelty
  • excitement
  • latest trends
  • improvements
  • advancements
  • differentiating
  • competitors
  • innovation
  • progress
  • attracting attention
  • generating curiosity
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