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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ............,

#house #english #friend #visit #addresses
Dear Ali, I guess you would be glad to know that I moved to a new house. I told you in the previous phone call that I had some issues with the landlord related to the services provided like lack of internet service and poor cable quality;
consequently
, I decided to move to a new apartment to avoid these difficulties after many discussions with him.
Additionally
, I would like to give you an overview of my new home, it has 2 bedrooms, a perfect terrace with a great city view and a classic bathroom with a bathtub;
therefore
, we can say it is around 150 square metres. In the end, I would like to invite you to come and visit me in the new home, please note that I will type the new address in the back of
this
 letter. I hope to hear from you soon. Best Regards, Ahmed
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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