The diagram below shows information about student attendance in various schools. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
students
attending in
Royal Change preposition
apply
Latin
, Didcot
Secondary, Seven Oaks, and Page Hill in the period of 2001 to 2007. Seven Oaks and Page Hill had the highest and lowest student attendance
, respectively. In addition
, Didcot
Secondary and Royal Latin
had steady positions, either second or third position.
First,
Seven Oaks scored the highest student attendance
in 2006, with almost one thousand students
in that year. It also
topped the number of student attendance
in the entire year between 2001 to 2007. In contrast
, Page Hill always got fewer students
than others and in 2001 the school scored the lowest attendance
with not exceeding 400 students
.
Lastly
, from 2001 to 2005 Royal Latin
always got more students
than Didcot
Secondary. Yet, in 2006 Didcot
Secondary surpassed the number of students
attending Royal Latin
with more than 600 students
for both schools. Furthermore
, the gap increased in the next year.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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