The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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The charts show information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. If we look in detail at the first chart between 2000 and 2050, we have had an increase in the ages of the population by about 10% and a decline in the young kids by about 13%.

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means that few children were born and the population over 60 is increasing by about 2%.

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, in Italy in 2050 the majority of people are old with almost 42,3% respect in Yemen and these dates aren’t beautiful at home.

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we will have a decrease in young kids by about 3% and an enormous difference in 15-59 with a decrease of 20%.

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, in Yemen and ,Italy we would expect to observe an increase in elderly in 60+ by 2050.

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, it is predicted that the 0-14 age group will plummet by 2050.

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age demographics
age structure
population distribution
youthful population
ageing population
life expectancy
birth rate
demographic shift
population projection
median age
dependents
working-age population
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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

In the future, people may have to live on other planets. Some think that it is therefore important to spend money researching other planets such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?