The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The charts show information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. If we look in detail at the first chart between 2000 and 2050, we have had an increase in the ages of the population by about 10% and a decline in the young kids by about 13%.
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means that few children were born and the population over 60 is increasing by about 2%.
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, in Italy in 2050 the majority of people are old with almost 42,3% respect in Yemen and these dates aren’t beautiful at home. Linking Words
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we will have a decrease in young kids by about 3% and an enormous difference in 15-59 with a decrease of 20%.
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, in Yemen and ,Italy we would expect to observe an increase in elderly in 60+ by 2050. Linking Words
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, it is predicted that the 0-14 age group will plummet by 2050.Linking Words
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