Fast food is a very common type of food in the modern world, but some people believe that it has a negative impact on health and lifestyle. Do you agree with this statement?

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Nowadays, it is becoming more and more popular to buy fast food.

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, some people consider that it has a harmful influence on humans’ lives in terms of their health and fitness. I strongly agree with

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statement and, in

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essay, I am going to prove my viewpoint with several arguments.

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with, it is necessary to understand that fast food mostly contains many calories.

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, there are about one thousand calories in one little burger.

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the fact that people always order approximately two or three dishes,

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amount suddenly transforms into three thousand calories.

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statistics, every third man in America has an obesity which is very harmful both for health and active lifestyle.

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, if we take a look at the cost of

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type of food, we can see that it is more expensive in comparison with raw products in common shops.

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, one average meal

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McDonald' is twice as expensive as the same number of uncooked products in a regular mall.

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, if society refuses to consume fast meals, it will be good for them not only in terms of health but

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make their daily expenditures less. In conclusion, I would like to say that citizens should understand that domestic products are better and cheaper.

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, in my way of thinking, if the government creates strict rules which obligate fast meal companies to pay higher taxes, it will reduce the number of people suffering from obesity.

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