The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in ne European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in ne European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000
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The bar chart above compares various types of travelling in terms of popularity during 1960,1980 and 2000 years.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that
while
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the figure of cars has been increasing significantly,other means of transport witnessed a fall
While
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the number of car users started at a low rate, the trend of walking accounted for almost 40 per cent.
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1980 saw the opposite situation, the car rate became more than a foot with 23% and 17% respectively.
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, the car rate rocketed to over 35% and the figure for walking plummeted to 10% Regarding buses, it stood at roughly 17% ,
then
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it rose and reached approximately,
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, the trend of buses plunged to half of the third. In the beginning, the bike was in the middle with a quarter of a hundred ,afterwards, there was a decline to around fifth per cent in 1980 .
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finally
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,in 2000 the bike mode collapsed to just over 5%
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