The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in ne European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

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The bar chart above compares various types of travelling in terms of popularity during 1960,1980 and 2000 years.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that

while

the figure of cars has been increasing significantly,other means of transport witnessed a fall

While

the number of car users started at a low rate, the trend of walking accounted for almost 40 per cent.

However

1980 saw the opposite situation, the car rate became more than a foot with 23% and 17% respectively.

Furthermore

, the car rate rocketed to over 35% and the figure for walking plummeted to 10% Regarding buses, it stood at roughly 17% ,

then

it rose and reached approximately,

moreover

, the trend of buses plunged to half of the third. In the beginning, the bike was in the middle with a quarter of a hundred ,afterwards, there was a decline to around fifth per cent in 1980 .

Then

finally

,in 2000 the bike mode collapsed to just over 5%

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