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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

#music #world
One can find a variety of
music
genre
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 globally.
Music
 forms an integral part of
a
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society and is at the heart of our traditions and cultures. Since ancient times, melodies and hymns have been a source of of enjoyment for human beings and they were of utmost importance in any
relegious
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religious
 ceremony and festivals.
Music
 is an art and humans need art to be creative and find peace of mind. We sometimes succumb to depression and stress
due to
 work or some
othere
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other
 problem
that
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 bothering us
from
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 a long time.
Furthermore
, it can
depriciate
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depreciate
 our mental
wellbeing
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. Listening to a calming melody can work wonders and help us to calm our nerves which can raise and spirits.
For instance
,
music
 can raise our spirits and fill us with enthusiasm, for
this
 sole reason many global sporting events create arena anthems which are fast and with a lot of bass. Traditional
music
 is of paramount importance, as it connects us to our roots.
Moreover
, they are the face of our culture and our lineage
along with
 that they are the reminder of our ancient history. Our folk songs and folklores can act as
conduit
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 from generation to generation, passing knowledge and wisdom.
For example
, in many
indian
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states
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 it is
cutomary
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customary
 to play traditional
muscial intruments
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musical instruments
 and local songs during auspicious
cermonies
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ceremonies
 and religious events because they are considered auspicious and herald of good fortune. To summarize,
music
 is at the core of art and human beings have been seeking solace in it from olden times. International
music
 brings people together albeit, our cultural songs connect us to our tradition and culture and have been a constant reminder of our past.
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