Some people argued that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. However, some people believe that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivations for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishments. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion

There is ongoing debate regarding
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punishment
for any
crime
. Some folks thinks that there should be one
perticular punsihment
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particular punishment
for each type of illegal
activities
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activity
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whereas
other argue that every unlawful activity is
differnt
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different
and situations and circumstances are different for
who
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those who
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commit the
crime
so there should different punishments . I strongly
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equivocate
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the
later
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argument.
This
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elaborate my views on
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argument.
To begin
with, there are many reasons for different
punsihment
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punishment
punishments
for each illegal
activities
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activity
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. First and foremost is
situation
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the situation
a situation
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of that
perticular
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particular
crime
.
In other words
, if someone
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the robbers to save their family or loved
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one
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than
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then
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it
is not consider
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is not considered
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as
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a
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crime
but self-defence.
Hence
, the
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punishment
of
this
crime
should be different from the murderers.
Secondly
, some juvenile
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not as serious as others
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therefore
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each unlawful
activities
are different.
Furthermore
, if
punishment
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the punishment
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sentense is different
than
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people
of
country
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the country
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believe in
justice
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the justice
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system and fairness of
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the decision
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of jury and judge rather than criticise the justice system.
On the other hand
, there are some advantages of
fix
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punishment
. To commence with, if punishments are fixed
then
decision
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the decision
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is speedy and accurate to make for the judge.
In addition
, fixed
punishment
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people
fear
to
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apply
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doing
any
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apply
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unethical
activities
.
For instance
, even
the
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minor
crime
such
as theft and pick-pocketing gets punishments
same
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for murder
then
people
fear
to do
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any minor
crime
too.
To conclude
,
people
claim that there should be
same
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the same
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punishment
for each unethical
ativitiy
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activity
activities
while
other
people
argue that
scenarion
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scenario
and motivation
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to
consider
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be considered
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when it comes to
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punishment
. I do opine that each
crime
has to have different
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sentences
as it
justify
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justifies
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the situation and
crime
too.
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