Write about the following topic: Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

After the

first

penalty, criminals perpetrate more

offenses

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offences

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.

According to

my personal thoughts, the main

cause

of

this

phenomenon is

severity

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the severity

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of punishment, and it can be solved in case the

government

take the

resposibility

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responsibility

. Offenders

are tend

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tend

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to commit

crimes

after having their

first

criminal record. I personally believe that the main

cause

if

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of

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this

is associated with

severity

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the severity

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of the

first

penalty.

On these

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days,

the

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simple

crimes

over the world

has

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have

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increased a lot, because the

government

ignore

such

offenses

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offences

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. When

such

basic offenses

are

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get serious

then

the

state

recognize

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recognizes

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it. For one thing, Patrick McCreary began his criminal life with low-profile

crimes

; later, he had done a critical strike to the

state

. After his performance, the

government

clarified that the penalties

will

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be more strict from now on in Germany.

Thus

, the principal

cause

of

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the incresing

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incresing

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increasing

crime rate is

about

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apply

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their

punisments

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punishments

punishment

. To overcome

this

issue, some priorities should be taken. If the

state

give

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gives

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harsh penalties to every

first

-time criminal,

then

it will be probable to reduce the crime rate.

For instance

,

according to

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the

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research conducted by Yale University

imply

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implies

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that after applying more serious punishments to offenders the US has achieved

the

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reduction

of

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in

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basic crime rates.

Thus

, in order to prevent

such

phenomenon

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a phenomenon

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the

state

should apply some essential

precendences

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precedence

precedences

.

To conclude

, some suggest that offenders begin perpetrating more

crimes

after having their

first

punishment; I personally consider that

principal

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cause

of it is about

government

and to solve

this

issue it is important to have priorities.