In the past important knowledge of culture and history was started in museums nowady information is freely available on internet therefore is no longer need for museum. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In the old days,
people
gathered
information
regarding
culture
and traditions from
the
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museum
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,
while
in recent times, certain
people
have accessed the internet for free
knowledge
of the same.
Therefore
,it has been suggested that there is no requirement for the
museum
. I strongly disagree with
this
statement because
people
lack true cultural and traditional
knowledge
, and
this
trend
also
creates a huge financial burden for individuals.
To begin
with, the key factor behind disagreement with
this
trend
is that
people
lack true
culture
and traditional
knowledge
.
This
is to say that the various online free resources are not trustworthy because they are not authorised by any government officials compared to the
museum
's library journal and articles, which were written by foreign authors;
therefore
,
people
decline their
knowledge
about
culture
and traditions.
For example
, the young generation in the UK collects
culture
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and
tradition
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information
from Google's free-access
culture
website
due to
the absence of the
museum
;
this
is
their
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principal reason for their little
knowledge
regarding
this
matter.
However
, the second reason for not agreeing with
this
trend
is that it creates a huge financial burden for individuals.
This
is because when
people
acquire free cultural
information
through surfing the high-speed internet
instead
of
museum
information
, which is most expensive for everyone in an average-income household, it creates huge financial pressure for them.
For example
, every middle-class family in India has financial pressure to access high-speed internet to gather free
knowledge
about
culture
and tradition. To summarise,
although
people
gathered
information
regarding
culture
and tradition from
museum
content in the past, now they learn that
knowledge
from free online materials. I strongly disagree with
this
trend
because
people
decrease their true
knowledge
and have financial burdens.
Submitted by Shrabani Banerjee on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invaluable
  • interactive
  • exhibit
  • artifacts
  • preserve
  • contextualize
  • authentic
  • curate
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