The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The
given
bar chart provides information on each UK Verb problem
apply
Families
demographic numbers from 1981 and 2001. Change noun form
family's
Overall
, a family with two members
was calculated the
highest of both Change preposition
as the
period
Change to a plural noun
periods
while
the big family was the least.
According to
the data, in 1981 about 31 British household
Change to a plural noun
households
counted
had 2 family Verb problem
apply
members
in each family, while
those who were in the
single family and 3 - 4 Correct article usage
a
members
was
shared almost similar number (17-20). Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, nuclear
family was found not popular around the country, which is just merely under 10.
Add an article
the nuclear
On the other hand
, in 2001 the number of the single family
rose slightly to 26. Add a hyphen
single-family
Likewise
, for those with 2 family members
which is
in 1988 counted by 31 Unnecessary verb
apply
then
decrease
to 34. Wrong verb form
decreased
In contrast
, the figure for extended family fall
significantly by about 5- 17 and the number Wrong verb form
fell
for
5 to 6 persons family Change preposition
of
members
also
plummeted to under 5 households.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words members with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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