The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

given

Verb problem

apply

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bar chart provides information on each UK

Families

Change noun form

family's

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demographic numbers from 1981 and 2001.

Overall

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, a family with two

members

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was calculated

the

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as the

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highest of both

period

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periods

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while

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the big family was the least.

According to

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the data, in 1981 about 31 British

household

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households

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counted

Verb problem

apply

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had 2 family

members

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in each family,

while

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those who were in

the

Correct article usage

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single family and 3 - 4

members

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was

Unnecessary verb

apply

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shared almost similar number (17-20).

On the other hand

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nuclear

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the nuclear

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family was found not popular around the country, which is just merely under 10.

On the other hand

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, in 2001 the number of the

single family

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single-family

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rose slightly to 26.

Likewise

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, for those with 2 family

members

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which

Unnecessary verb

apply

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in 1988 counted by 31

then

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decrease

Wrong verb form

decreased

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to 34.

In contrast

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, the figure for extended family

fall

Wrong verb form

fell

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significantly by about 5- 17 and the number

for

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5 to 6 persons family

members

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also

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plummeted to under 5 households.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words members with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

155 words

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In future, all cars and buses will be driverless. Only passengers will be the humans traveling in this vehicles. Do you think the advantages of driverless cars outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world, it is private companies rather than government who pay for and carry out most on scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.