The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The
given
Verb problem
apply
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bar chart provides information on each UK
Families
Change noun form
family's
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demographic numbers from 1981 and 2001.
Overall
, a family with two
members
was calculated
the
Change preposition
as the
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highest of both
period
Change to a plural noun
periods
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while
the big family was the least.
According to
the data, in 1981 about 31 British
household
Change to a plural noun
households
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counted
Verb problem
apply
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had 2 family
members
in each family,
while
those who were in
the
Correct article usage
a
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single family and 3 - 4
members
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
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shared almost similar number (17-20).
On the other hand
,
nuclear
Add an article
the nuclear
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family was found not popular around the country, which is just merely under 10.
On the other hand
, in 2001 the number of the
single family
Add a hyphen
single-family
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rose slightly to 26.
Likewise
, for those with 2 family
members
which
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
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in 1988 counted by 31
then
decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
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to 34.
In contrast
, the figure for extended family
fall
Wrong verb form
fell
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significantly by about 5- 17 and the number
for
Change preposition
of
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5 to 6 persons family
members
also
plummeted to under 5 households.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words members with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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