Many person are opting for several career options as compared to a single career option to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

-There are several reasons to choose the
UK
for my
further
study.
Firstly
,
UK
universities have the best academic standards in the world.
Secondly
, the
UK
provides a great place to get a high-quality
education
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affordable cost and the government has made it easier than ever for students to access affordable
education
.
Lastly
, the admission process to the
UK
is very easy and
gets
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a visa without any problem.
Moreover
, not only the
education
system but the
UK
provides some other benefits
such
as a high level of security, a better healthcare system and many more. -There are several reasons to choose London. Studying in London will put me at the heart of the places where I can find
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of life improvement with the help of
education
.
Additionally
, studying in London will give me the opportunity to meet a wide range of professionals, both my course and career. Even though, there are some key advantages of studying in
this
city like the city is full of culture and diversity, central travel hub of visitors, theatre and music, famous sights to see and many more.
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Ensure that the introduction and conclusion directly address the prompt and clearly state your position.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic necessity
  • gig economy
  • income diversification
  • personal fulfillment
  • technological advancements
  • digital platforms
  • work-life imbalance
  • stress and burnout
  • wage stagnation
  • rising cost of living
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