The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The pie diagrams depict the major factors for young people in
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Africa
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phones between 2016 and 2019. Correct your spelling
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Overall
, the
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is
the most Change the verb form
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reason
for using telephones Correct word choice
common reason
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every Change preposition
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year
over the period while
the
phone calls Correct article usage
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is
the least factor for them.
It can be seen that Change the verb form
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the
social platforms were the Correct article usage
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reasons
for young generations which was close to 50% Fix the agreement mistake
reason
in
each Change preposition
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year
. Moreover
, in 2019 that
the figure was the highest rate at 56%. Correct word choice
apply
Similarly
, email that the figures nearly around 20% in
each Change preposition
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year
and there were the
secondary Correct article usage
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factor
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factors
in
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over
the period, except in 2019 which was digital Change preposition
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camera
at 20%. Meanwhile, email stayed at 19%. By the way, phone calls were the least reason for the teens during the time that stayed around 10% in almost every Fix the agreement mistake
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year
, except in 2019 that just 5%.
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