two maps below show an island before ans after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps illustrate information about an
island
before and after its development. This
island
is constructed to be a tourist town.
Overall
, it is clear that
in the past, this
island
was unspoilt without facilities at all. On the other hand
, there have been some significant changes in its facilities and transportation, but all trees on the island
have been untouched.
In the past, the island
was completely bared
with no facilities only some tropical native trees Replace the word
bare
grown
on it. Change the form of the verb
growing
However
, there was a beach area on the west of the island
.
After its development, the island
have
transformed Change the verb form
has
to
a holiday Change preposition
into
island
where
consists of some amenities that tourists need. The pier was constructed on the south of the Correct word choice
that
island
and have been
welcomed visitors to the Wrong verb form
has
island
by boat. Apart from that, reception was built around 20 metre
north of the pair, and on the north coast, Fix the agreement mistake
metres
restaurant
was constructed there. In terms of accommodation, there are two areas of bungalows. Correct article usage
a restaurant
Firstly
six bungalows were built on the western side of the island
, around the palm tree area and not far from the beach, where visitors can swim there
. Rephrase
apply
Secondly
, nine bungalows were constructed and located in the middle of the island
where customers can enjoy the pier and woodland views.Submitted by patinyajaithan on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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