two maps below show an island before ans after the construction of some tourist facilities.

two maps below show an island before ans after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps illustrate information about an
island
before and after its development.
This
island
is constructed to be a tourist town.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in the past,
this
island
was unspoilt without facilities at all.
On the other hand
, there have been some significant changes in its facilities and transportation, but all trees on the
island
have been untouched. In the past, the
island
was completely
bared
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with no facilities only some tropical native trees
grown
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on it.
However
, there was a beach area on the west of the
island
. After its development, the
island
have
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transformed
to
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into
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a holiday
island
where
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that
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consists of some amenities that tourists need. The pier was constructed on the south of the
island
and
have been
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welcomed visitors to the
island
by boat. Apart from that, reception was built around 20
metre
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metres
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north of the pair, and on the north coast,
restaurant
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a restaurant
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was constructed there. In terms of accommodation, there are two areas of bungalows.
Firstly
six bungalows were built on the western side of the
island
, around the palm tree area and not far from the beach, where visitors can swim
there
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.
Secondly
, nine bungalows were constructed and located in the middle of the
island
where customers can enjoy the pier and woodland views.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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