The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for building industry.
The diagram demonstrates information about how bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there are seven steps
of
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making brick, which include preparing the raw material, mixing the
clay
mixing the mixture, moulding, drying
and
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heating the brick and packaging
for
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it for
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delivery. In the first stage of preparing raw material,
clay
is dig
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is dug
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up by a digger in the field and all
clay
with
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different sizes is
seived
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divided
to
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into
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smaller
size
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by a metal grid and a roller. After
that
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the
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clay
is prepared and ready for the next step, sand and water are added to the
clay
form
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a mixture paste.
Then
the
clay
mixture is set its shape by two types, first by moulding and second by wire cutting to rectangular shape.
Following
this
, all bricks are dried in the drying oven for 24-48 hours and heated
them
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at kilns for two different
temperature
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temperatures
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. Starting with
moderate
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a moderate
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temperature at 200-980
degree
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degrees
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Celsius and second heating at
high
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a high
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temerature
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temperature
at
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870-1300
degree
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degrees
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, after which all
brick
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bricks
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are
let
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left
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to be cooled by
cooling
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a cooling
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chamber for 48-72 hours.
The next step is
pakacging
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packing
and
deliverying
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delivery
delivering
by
a
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truck.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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