The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for building industry.

The diagram demonstrates information about how bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

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,

it is clear that

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there are seven steps

of

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to

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making brick, which include preparing the raw material, mixing the

clay

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mixing the mixture, moulding, drying

and

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apply

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heating the brick and packaging

for

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it for

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delivery. In the first stage of preparing raw material,

clay

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is dig

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is dug

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up by a digger in the field and all

clay

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with

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of

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different sizes is

seived

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divided

to

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into

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smaller

size

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sizes

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by a metal grid and a roller. After

that

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the

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clay

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is prepared and ready for the next step, sand and water are added to the

clay

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form

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to form

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a mixture paste.

Then

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the

clay

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mixture is set its shape by two types, first by moulding and second by wire cutting to rectangular shape.

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this

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, all bricks are dried in the drying oven for 24-48 hours and heated

them

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at kilns for two different

temperature

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temperatures

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. Starting with

moderate

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a moderate

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temperature at 200-980

degree

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degrees

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Celsius and second heating at

high

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a high

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temerature

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temperature

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870-1300

degree

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degrees

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, after which all

brick

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bricks

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are

let

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left

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to be cooled by

cooling

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a cooling

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chamber for 48-72 hours.

The next step is

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pakacging

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packing

and

deliverying

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delivery

delivering

by

a

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apply

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truck.