The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for building industry.
The diagram demonstrates information about how bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are seven steps of
making brick, which include preparing the raw material, mixing the Change preposition
to
clay
mixing the mixture, moulding, drying and
heating the brick and packaging Correct word choice
apply
for
delivery.
In the first stage of preparing raw material, Correct pronoun usage
it for
clay
is dig
up by a digger in the field and all Change the verb form
is dug
clay
with
different sizes is Change preposition
of
seived
Correct your spelling
divided
to
smaller Change preposition
into
size
by a metal grid and a roller. After Fix the agreement mistake
sizes
that
Correct determiner usage
the
clay
is prepared and ready for the next step, sand and water are added to the clay
form
a mixture paste. Fix the infinitive
to form
Then
the clay
mixture is set its shape by two types, first by moulding and second by wire cutting to rectangular shape.
Following
this
, all bricks are dried in the drying oven for 24-48 hours and heated them
at kilns for two different Correct pronoun usage
apply
temperature
. Starting with Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
moderate
temperature at 200-980 Correct article usage
a moderate
degree
Celsius and second heating at Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
high
Correct article usage
a high
temerature
Correct your spelling
temperature
at
870-1300 Change preposition
of
degree
, after which all Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
brick
are Fix the agreement mistake
bricks
let
to be cooled by Correct your spelling
left
cooling
chamber for 48-72 hours. Correct article usage
a cooling
The next step is
pakacging
and Correct your spelling
packing
deliverying
by Correct your spelling
delivery
delivering
a
truck.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words clay with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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