The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram illustrates information about how

sugar

is produced from

sugar

canes

in manufacture.

Overall

,

it is clear that

there are seven steps

of

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making

sugar

.

However

, there are three main stages of

sugar

making which include growing and harvesting

sugar

canes

, crushing for its

juice

, purifying and heating for

condense

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syrup

and

lastly

form

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it into

sugar

crystals plus drying and cooling it. The first stage is that

sugar

canes

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cane

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are

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is

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seeded and

let

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left

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them grow for 12-18 months in the field,

after

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apply

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this

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it is time for harvesting, which can be done by hand or

harvesting

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by harvesting

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trucks. Once all

sugar

canes

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cane

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are

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is

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collected, they are all crushed by a crushing machine to get its

juice

.

Following

this

the

juice

is purified with

limestone

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filter, and it is heated on a stove

untill

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until

the

juice

change

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changes

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its consistency

as

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a

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syrup

.

Subsequently

, the

syrup

is centrifuged to separate

sugar

crystals from the concentrated

syrup

. The final stage is

that

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all

sugar

cystals

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crystals

are dried and

let

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left

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cool in a container.