The graph below shows the number of b in three cities between 1965 and 2010. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the
amount
of international meetings which were organized in three different places from 1965 to 2010.
Change the quantifier
number
Overall
, the trends were fluctuations in city
A and B
, however
, there was a significant upward trend in city
A
Both City
A and B
fluctuated in
the whole of 40 Change preposition
over
years
, however
, city
A started with the highest of 35 seminars in 1965 then
plummeted to 20 in 1975. The number of international conferences went up to 30 and fluctuated considerably during the next 20 years
, and eventually stayed at 20 conferences in 2010. City
B
marked a more stable trend than city
Capitalize word
City
B
, the highest point was 32 events in 1965,
and decreased gradually to 27 in 1975. In a period of 30 Remove the comma
apply
years
later, the number of international events in this
city
had a slight fluctuation from 29 to 28 seminars and finally
went down to 25 in 2010.
City
A had a constant increase during the first 30 years
which was 0 in 1965 to 28 in 1995. It plunged to 29 in 2005 and hit the highest point of 29 in 2010.Submitted by lantran180487 on
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