Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views anf give your opinion.

The prompt illustrates a contentious view, where some people believe that education should be provided in a very early phase of childhood,

while

others hold the belief of starting primary schools following a certain age restriction. In my opinion, the latter

one

is a positive development for two reasons.

However

, there is

one

drawback that will be discussed. First of all, avoiding primary schools until a

child

is mature enough is a good step to follow because schools are nowadays a highly competitive place.

For example

, a

child

may face bullying from his friends in school at every age.

In addition

, nowadays there is increasing academic pressure even in kindergartens.

As a result

,

children

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children

's mental development, and is

one

of the root causes of various mental issues

such

as depression, insecurity etc.

Secondly

, home can be a great place for a

child

to receive education.

For instance

,

majority

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of

children

learn to distinguish colours and recognise different letters by playing with educational tools

while

they are alone in their house.

Moreover

, a recent survey .

Moreover

, a recent survey found that home-based tutoring has a long-lasting effect on a

child

's memory, where they showed that

children

's memorisation ability can be enhanced

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to 30% when they are being taught by their parents. Notwithstanding, the belief of letting

child

to stay at home until they get mature enough has

one

disadvantage: lack of socialization. In a

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school a toddler will have the opportunity to talk and play with a group of fellow toddlers, which teaches him the importance of good friendships in his later life.

However

, a home-based tutoring system lacks

this

perspective. In conclusion, applying age restriction in

children

's education is primarily a positive thing for the two reasons outlined above.

Nevertheless

, it is not a perfect change and lack of socialization is a concerning thing in

child

development which we need to deal with.