Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.what is the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Transnational corporations have been gradually spreading in
the
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third world
countries. Add a hyphen
third-world
Although
this
might play a pivotal role in the economic development of these countries, it may cause a negative psychological impact on the worker.
On one hand, multinational enterprises can enhance the economic growth of the nations and increase the
job opportunities. Correct article usage
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In other words
, when a global company opens branches and factories across the state, this
will, eventually, pour foreign money and the financial atmosphere could revive. A prime example of this
is Iraq, after the economic remodeling
that has taken place in the Change the spelling
remodelling
last
ten years, numerous company
compete with each other to have a representative in Iraq. Fix the agreement mistake
companies
This
example shows that not only the fiscal side of matters will flourish, but also
the citizens will be more prosperous.
On the other hand
, one of the main goals for the
foreign enterprise by expended in these poor nations is to lower Correct article usage
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the
expenditure and Correct article usage
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this
, accordingly
, could lead to a
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consequence
. To illustrate, prolonged hours of working Fix the agreement mistake
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put
laborers
under consistent pressure which ,in turn, will cause psychological and serious physical conditions Change the spelling
labourers
such
as hypertension, depression and cardiovascular disease. For example
, Apple has become
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come
due to
the appealing conditions the workers was
suffering from. What can be said here is that Change the verb form
were
this
foreign company may violate the
international human Correct article usage
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right
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
rights
after
this
easy
has reiterated the Correct your spelling
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above mentioned
ideas, it can be said that transnational companies have Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
its
own merits and demerits.Correct pronoun usage
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