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News stories on TV and the newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures so we will see Landis pictures are more effective than words. What’s your opinion about it?

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It is undeniable that many
information
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 sources that are used to present news nowadays either on television or in newspapers mostly consist of many
pictures
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 and those have more affected consumers’ interest than words. I personally think that it is partly true, in the following paragraph reasons to support my opinion will discussed in detail. Technology has impacted people’s
behavior
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, especially the hurrying of life.
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 causes them to become quickly addicted and unable to concentrate for a long time.
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, many current social media use
pictures
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 to advertise and encourage users effectively.
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, they tend to prefer to receive
information
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 immediately rather than waste the time to read long-line words.
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, a concern about it is considering
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 with judgment. Presenting the
information
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 by using visual media can help the reader to understand more clearly and correctly. As evidence of
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, a photo or picture can be described
instead
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 of many words and increase new experiences.
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, sports news is usually offered with
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 that show the environment of competition, the emotions, and the movement of athletes.
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, it can explain more details about the story or situation. In conclusion,
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 there are both negative and positive aspects of illustration by
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 compared with characters. Some of the changes have affected people in a negative way, especially in terms of receiving too rapidly
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 without realizable.
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, media enhancement
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 has positive effects on improving the experiences of users if it is used appropriately.
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