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Band 4

Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Study
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 offline is the traditional
way
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 to acquire knowledge
in
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 the
university
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. But in the present age, especially after
he
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 Covid 19 epidemic,
learn
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learning
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 by traditional
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 is no longer possible for
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,
Online
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the Online
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 learning
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happened to help
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students
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 keep up
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 courses with
university
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 progress, which is
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 a good
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 to improve
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education
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 system in
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university
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universities
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.
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, online
course
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courses
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make
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give
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education
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 to a wider range of people, including those who cannot attend traditional classes
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 geographic restrictions.
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Additionally
,
students
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 can be allowed to
study
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 on their schedule when learning online.
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, cost savings are factors that help
students
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 balance their finances when studying online.
According to
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 statistics of the
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 economics and
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finance
 for the quality of online learning in 2021. Over 50%
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students
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 choose the online
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instead
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 of the traditional
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 because of the
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 savings. But not every technique is perfect. On the
down
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other
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 hand, using
online
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the online
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method
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 lacks
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interaction and immediate feedback, which can lead to feelings of isolation and hinder social
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students
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student
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 have the ability to
study
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 online, they need good
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self–discipline
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 to be able to
study
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 well in
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onlinve
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online
 environment. In conclusion, having a new
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 to learn in
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 epidemic when people cannot
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 out
beside
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house
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 is a good
development
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 in
education
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. But whether online courses are positive or negative
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also
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 depends on the environment and the circumstances. It can
increased
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 the range
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 reduce the costs, which is a good
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,
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, it
also
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have
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 the challenge to the quality and the quality interaction for
students
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. In
summary
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 the combination between the traditional
method
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 and the online technique would make the best
development
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 in
education
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distance learning
  • Flexible schedule
  • Virtual classroom
  • Digital resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Synchronous learning
  • Cost-effective
  • Self-paced study
  • Technical difficulties
  • Blended learning
  • Online modules
  • Remote access
  • Student engagement
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