You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking frined. In your letter -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to you to let you know that I recently moved to a new

place

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. As you already know, I have been living in Brampton near Sheridan College since I came to Canada.

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, living close to the University was another reason. But now I have completed my Graduation and I got my work permit as well. The reason for moving from the previous house was the distance between the house and the workplace. I am a full-time employee now and got a job in Peterborough which is quite far away and unable to cover

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distance on a daily basis. Dwellings in Peterborough are not as big as in Brampton. There are usually two or three-bedroom houses. I am living in a two-bedroom apartment. I chose for myself a private room and lived with an Indian couple who lent me

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room. The view from my window is quite exquisite. I have a big garden in the house

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covered by trees. I would like to invite you to visit my new

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. It is the exact same

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which I remember you mentioned to me that you want to live in

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type quiet and nature-oriented

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. I will wait for your response. Lots of love, Harpreet.

harpreet291kaurThu Oct 05 2023

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structure

Organize the letter into paragraphs to improve coherence and readability.

lexicon

Use clearer and more specific language when describing the new house.

content

Include more reasons for inviting your friend to visit your new place.

grammar

Check and correct grammar and sentence structure errors.

tone

Add a more warm and friendly tone to the greeting and closing of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

222 words

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