Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future. Please enter new information and examples here and not duplicate the information you have entered on the work experience and education section of this form
Today, I want to enrich my knowledge of IT and engineering techniques, especially in
telecommunication
and cyber
security
. I am looking for something new and interesting to be taught by the best professor in the UK. Then
, I am keen to learn how people
or organizations develop modern technologies and handle some problems in the UK. I believe that both subjects have different perspectives when I learn and discuss with others
. For telecommunication
itself, I wonder how the UK maintaining the technology in the future. On the contrary
, I am looking forward to the UK’s prevention to solve some cyber
security
issues.
Security
can guarantee some vulnerable aspects that become exposed to hackers. It is not only for me but also
for others
. It can be done with small a thing. For instance
, you can tell people
not to write their password on the workstation. This
condition can create awareness among others
and make a great impact. Besides
, in my country, there are still a lot of organizations that do not know how to secure their digital assets. To illustrate, the government website or application is vulnerable to being hacked by bad guys. As a result
, there are a huge number of attacks facing their websites so those applications cannot be used by customers. It can impact their business process and lose a lot of money.
Besides
, as a security
analyst, I have some experiences that will fit with this
course. I handled several security
incidents in my company. There were small to huge attacks resolved by me and my team. When I tried to defend my company’s digital assets, I always learned something new. I implemented ISO27001 with an information security
management system topic for my company. When I did that project, there was a lot of good information on whether I should comply or not with ISO’s control. Cyber
security
is not only for technology but also
for people
and the process. So I realize that the most vulnerable aspect of security
is people
. Proved with the second project that I had done, I did phishing e-mail. I sent fake messages to my company’s staff and waited until they responded to my e-mail. If they responded, they would send their password or credentials to my website. Finally
, to inform some awareness, I just broadcasted a poster to handle e-mail phishing that I had done before.
On the other hand
, I believe that telecommunication
still develops and gives me plenty of information that I should know. For example
, if someone wants to communicate with others
in the long term, they shall use several mediums so the communication can be connected. Then
, it will make a significant potential vacancy in the future because it covers various aspects, in particular
signal processing, radar, antenna, satellite, neural network, and so on. My previous academic background provides a strong foundation for telecommunication
too. To illustrate this
condition, I built a gun radar to detect the speed of vehicles so people
had to limit their velocity. Finally
, I hope to contribute to cutting-edge radar research and solving real-world problems.
To summarize, I think my past experience and knowledge will help me while
I take those courses. I wonder to help people
by giving some clear understanding, to give
an example, giving free training for youngsters or creating Wrong verb form
giving
cyber
security
schools for preparing good talent. Next,
this
course will deepen my knowledge of telecommunication
too, enabling me to pursue advanced research and contribute to innovative projects. In the end, there are no people
with lack awareness of cyber
security
and telecommunication
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