Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future. Please enter new information and examples here and not duplicate the information you have entered on the work experience and education section of this form
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, in my country, there are still a lot of organizations that do not know how to secure their digital assets. To illustrate, the government website or application is vulnerable to being hacked by bad guys. Linking Words
As a result
, there are a huge number of attacks facing their websites so those applications cannot be used by customers. It can impact their business process and lose a lot of money.
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, to inform some awareness, I just broadcasted a poster to handle e-mail phishing that I had done before.
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telecommunication
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, it will make a significant potential vacancy in the future because it covers various aspects, Linking Words
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