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The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The given pie charts compare the responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about the
range
 of
books
 and
the
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non-print
 material
of
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 a university library. It is manifest from the graph that more postgraduate students gave very good
rating
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 to the
range
 of
books
,
whereas
 more
undergrads
 were very happy with the
non-print
 material.
Overall
, a majority of university students were satisfied or very happy with the
range
 of
books
 and the
non-print
 material
of
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 the library. Just over half the
postgrads
 opined that the
range
 of
books
 was very good,
whereas
 almost a third said that it was satisfactory.
By contrast
 50%
undergrads
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 were just satisfied with the
range
 of
books
 and over a
quarter
 said that the
range
 of
books
 was very good. Just under a
quarter
 of
undergrads
 and 12%
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postgrads
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 were not happy with the
range
 of
books
. As far as the
non-print
 material is concerned, just over a
quarter
postgrads
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of postgrads
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 and just over half
undergrads
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of undergrads
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 rated it as very good. Almost half the
postgrads
 were satisfied with the
non- print
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 material,
whereas
 the percentage of satisfied
undergrads
 was just a
quarter
. Approximately a fourth of
undergrads
 and
postgrads
 were not happy with the
non-print
 material and rated it as very bad.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words range, books, non-print, undergrads, postgrads, quarter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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