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The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The given pie charts compare the responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about the
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non-print
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 a university library. It is manifest from the graph that more postgraduate students gave very good
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 to the
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 more
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, a majority of university students were satisfied or very happy with the
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 the library. Just over half the
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 almost a third said that it was satisfactory.
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 were just satisfied with the
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 and over a
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 said that the
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postgrads
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 were not happy with the
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. As far as the
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 and just over half
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 rated it as very good. Almost half the
postgrads
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 material,
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 the percentage of satisfied
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 was just a
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. Approximately a fourth of
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postgrads
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 were not happy with the
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 material and rated it as very bad.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words range, books, non-print, undergrads, postgrads, quarter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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