The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a

questionnaire about a university library. Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The given pie charts compare the responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about the
range
of
books
and
the
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non-print
material
of
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a university library. It is manifest from the graph that more postgraduate students gave very good
rating
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ratings
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to the
range
of
books
,
whereas
more
undergrads
were very happy with the
non-print
material.
Overall
, a majority of university students were satisfied or very happy with the
range
of
books
and the
non-print
material
of
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the library. Just over half the
postgrads
opined that the
range
of
books
was very good,
whereas
almost a third said that it was satisfactory.
By contrast
50%
undergrads
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were just satisfied with the
range
of
books
and over a
quarter
said that the
range
of
books
was very good. Just under a
quarter
of
undergrads
and 12%
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postgrads
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were not happy with the
range
of
books
. As far as the
non-print
material is concerned, just over a
quarter
postgrads
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of postgrads
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and just over half
undergrads
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of undergrads
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rated it as very good. Almost half the
postgrads
were satisfied with the
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material,
whereas
the percentage of satisfied
undergrads
was just a
quarter
. Approximately a fourth of
undergrads
and
postgrads
were not happy with the
non-print
material and rated it as very bad.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words range, books, non-print, undergrads, postgrads, quarter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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