Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A section of society believes that an international
car-free
day
will be a more effective solution to decrease air
pollution
, however
, I agree with the latter view of applying effective ideas to do so. This
essay will discuss both views.
The main source of pollution
is fuel generated by vehicles
, however
, this
essay disagrees that car pollution
is the only reason for air
pollution
. There are various factors which hammer air
contamination. Car pollution
is like a drop in the ocean and having a car-free
day
is not going to show a big impact as the cars back on the roads will generate the polluted air
again. This
is not a long-term solution and will not be helpful to the community. For example
, as per the Oxford University survey conducted in 2017 in London showed that only 5% of pollution
was reduced in London on a car-free
day
.
There are many alternate ways to control air
pollution
, to name a few uses of public transport, eco-friendly vehicles
and planting more trees. The use of electronic and eco-friendly vehicles
will reduce the contamination of air
for a long time. For instance
, according to
the New York Times in 2018, citizens of Hungary have switched their use of vehicles
by making more use of eco-friendly cars and commuting by public transport. This
has tremendously reduced the air
pollution
in their country by almost 60%.
To conclude
, a car-free
day
is a short-term solution however
switching to eco-friendly products will show the long-term results and will be beneficial to us and our surroundings.Submitted by deepalivaz on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the topic and the writer's stance on the issue. Also, provide a concluding summary in the conclusion.
task achievement
The response addresses the task to a sufficient extent. However, it would be beneficial to develop the ideas more fully and provide a more balanced discussion of both views.
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- moreover
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- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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