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Some say that today's life is better than it will be in the future; others disagree and say that in the future life will be better than now. Discuss and include your opinion

Whether or not today's life is better than the
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 is a highly controversial issue. Many people opine that it is
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 others hold opposing views.
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 essay will look into both perspectives before coming to a conclusion. On one side of the argument, some say that the present time is better than the
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 because humans are still currently needed for work and are earning stable incomes. Later on, robots may be replacing humans, causing them to lose jobs and their income.
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 would reduce the quality of life. Not only that, everyone will be too reliant on technology, leading to low development of skills and possibly failure in their career or education. Using AI to do homework or quizzes would mean that students are cheating
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 a lack of knowledge and skills needed to pursue their careers and become successful.
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 would lead to a lack of skilled labour in the economy.
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, technology would be more advanced later on, making it easier for people to work. Currently, ChatGPT is being used worldwide. In the later years, there may be resources that are more useful and efficient than ChatGPT, making tasks more convenient.
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 allows work to be done quickly In conclusion, I strongly believe that today's life is better than the
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 because at the moment, people are more hardworking and have intellectual curiosity but in the
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Your introduction should state your opinion more clearly. Make it obvious that you're going to discuss both sides and then give your view at the end.
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Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea. You might want to start each paragraph with a topic sentence to guide the reader.
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Try to include more examples in your paragraphs. This will help support your ideas better and make them clearer.
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Your essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion which is good.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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