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The table provides a breakdown by selected costing over the next five years in American currency for three environmental groups for sustainable forestry.

The table provides a breakdown by selected costing over the next five years in American currency for three environmental groups for sustainable forestry.
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The table given depicts the breakdown of 5 years' expenditures for three sustainable forestry environmental communities and the pie chart below projects the cost allocation in
year
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 1. From the figure, it is obvious that Southeast Asia's expenses are consistently the largest amongst the remaining areas and always increase from
year
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 to
year
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.
On the contrary
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, West Africa and Central America gradually dropped from the first
year
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 until the fifth period by more than half. At the beginning of the report, West Africa and Central America spent $10.5
Million
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 and $20
Million
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 respectively to run their environmental groups' operations.
Besides
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, Southeast Asia has become the top spender for the sustainable initiative with a $30
Million
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 budget used in the first
year
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.
According to
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 the pie chart, half of the expense was allocated for salaries, making it the head cost component. The rest of the expenditure went to set-up costs, training, and office expenses. Moving on to the following period, South-East Asia remained at the top spending position and reached its peak with a $50
million
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 budget spent in
year
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 4 and
year
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 5.
In contrast
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, West Africa continuously comprised the smallest portion throughout the five periods, with $2.5
million
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 spent in
year
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 3 and
year
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 4 and $3.5
million
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 allocated in the
last
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year
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. Similar to the latter country's downward trend, Central America
also
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 experienced a budget cut from $12
million
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 in
year
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 2 to $5
million
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 in the rest of the periods.
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