In today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. this accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
generation, everyone who has a smart device can capture the image
and they can share it with others instantly. This
feature is affecting the value of professional photographers. I totally disagree with the statement that taking a picture with a cell phone will decrease the value of professional photographers. First, using a professional camera
will enable the person to capture the image
in the best quality
. Second,
the top-end camera
has a feature to change lenses according to
the situation.
Starting with the quality
of the image
, every top-end image capturing
machine has a special chip to catch a photo, which helps the photo to deserve the best Add a hyphen
image-capturing
quality
. Apart from that, they also
have extra settings like adjusting shutter speed, ISO range
to increase and decrease the brightness, grid option and much more. Change the verb form
ranges
As a result
, it helps the person to catch the shot perfectly. For example
, most data scientists say that people
are still taking passport photos with the help of a DSLR camera
for their office usage.
On the other hand
, using a DSLR camera
will allow the citizen to change the lens according to
the environment. But, in the cell phone people
do not have the option to interchange the lens. Moreover
, when people
change their special glass with the camera
, it helps them to capture a precise shot of the circumstances. As a consequence
, they can print the image
without compromising the quality
of the picture. For instance
, most printer manufacturers said, that people
deserve the best quality
of an image
when they use a DSLR camera
.
In conclusion, the professional camera
has various features likes, changing lenses and special settings to adjust the colour of the picture to achieve the best photo. In my opinion, a professional camera
is always a professional camera
even the mobile industry comes with new technology cameras.Submitted by jeeveshkb22 on
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Task Achievement
To strengthen your argument, including comparisons between the capabilities of smartphones and professional cameras, could provide a more balanced view.
Task Achievement
Consider elaborating on how professional photographers add value beyond their equipment, such as through their skills, vision, and experience.
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Coherence and Cohesion
Using a wider range of cohesive devices could improve the flow of your essay. For example, contrastive connectives ('however', 'on the other hand') can help in making clear distinctions between points.
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The essay presents a well-structured argument, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
Task Achievement
Effective use of examples to support the main points, such as the mention of passport photos and printer manufacturers.
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Your commitment to a singular perspective throughout the essay maintains a strong and clear stance on the issue.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.