The number of people who choose to get married in the future is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Marriage has been an important tradition for centuries. Two people choose each other to spend the rest of their lives together. However, it is predicted that the number of marriages in the future will decrease. I completely agree with this and this essay will present my reasons why.

Admittedly, in light of the escalation in individualism, many

people

tend to live lonely for their whole lives. Individualists

prioritizes

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the promotion of their goal and desires

while

refusing any other external elements.

People

follow

this

tendency and just try to have good self-reliance and independence, which makes them less adequate for married relationships, where disagreements and conflict emerge regularly. Lacking of

such

kindness and open-minded characteristics can lead to the end of their marriage.

For instance

, in Vietnam, many investigators have shared identical figures about

people

's divorce rates, which have reached their peak in the

last

20 years, which does not seem reliable for

people

to get married. Another reason is the financial aspect. In

this

hustle and bustle life wages and incomes will be the measure of a person. Humans are put under pressure to have enough good preparation before having any long-term commitment to others. As can be seen manifestly, one's half or even full

of

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property must be separated from their counterparts when they get divorced, which puts them at risk of losing all of their domain or even their kids.

For example

,

people

who have experienced a broken-up relationship reveal that they have to give their assets to their wife(or husband). Many of them have taken the authority of nurturing their children since they have been proven to no longer provide good conditions for their kids. Taking everything into consideration, it is obvious that the number of

people

attending marriage has significantly decreased.

However

,

this

issue can be ameliorated through some adequate policies and consistent efforts

in renovating

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people

's consciousness. If

this

happens,

this

issue will have been addressed utterly and successfully.