The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the
number
of families in the US in five income
groups
(
group
1 with less than $25000,
group
2 between $25,000 to $49,999,
group
3 between $50,000 to $74,999,
group
4 between $75,000 to $99,999 and
group
5 with more than $100,000) in
three
years (2007, 2011 and 2015).
Overall
, the
households
in income
groups
1 and 2 saw a rise in 2011 and stayed almost at the same level in 2015.
Whereas
,
group
5 saw a dip in 2011 and rose to the
highes
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highest
number
in
compaison
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comparison
with other
groups
in 2015.
However
, the numbers in
groups
three
and four did not see any significant change. In terms of the
number
of
households
in
groups
one and two, they grew from 25 and 27.5
millions
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, in 2007 to 29 and 30
million
in 2011, respectively.
While
in 2015 they fell by a
million
each.
In contrast
,
household
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households
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in
group
five fell from about 30
million
in 2007 to 28
million
in 2011
,
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and rose again to 33
million
in 2015.
Whereas
, the
number
of
households
in
groups
three
and four began at about 21 and 14.5
million
in 2007 respectively.
While
the
households
in
group
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Group Three
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three
continued at the same level all the way till 2015,
group
4 dipped to 14
million
in 2011 and rose to 15
million
in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, groups, group, three, households, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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