The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided illustration displays the floor map of a public
library
now and 20 years ago.
Overall
, the
library
changes
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has changed
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a lot and a cafe is introduced over the given period.
However
, the entrance area remained the same. Tables and chairs are removed from the centre of the
library
. A cafe is developed in the south-east corner of it and an enquiry desk which was present
at
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in
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the south-east shifted to the east of the
library
in between the self-service machines and adult fiction
books
sections.
Following
this
,
children's
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the children's
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books
room
converted
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was converted
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into
lecture
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a lecture
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room
. From the entrance to the
left
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left,
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there was a reading
room
20 years ago which
replaced
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was replaced
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into
computer
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the computer
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room
. The west side of the
library
now
have
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a reference
books
portion. There was a computer games
room
in
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on
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the north-west side of the
library
which
converted
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into
Storytelling
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a Storytelling
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events
room
and
sofa
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a sofa
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placed
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in that
room
for comfortable sitting for
audience
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the audience
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. In
this
room
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room,
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Children's fiction
books
section
also
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was also
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added for the
children's
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children
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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