The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided illustration displays the floor map of a public
library
now and 20 years ago.
Overall
, the library
changes
a lot and a cafe is introduced over the given period. Wrong verb form
has changed
However
, the entrance area remained the same.
Tables and chairs are removed from the centre of the library
. A cafe is developed in the south-east corner of it and an enquiry desk which was present at
the south-east shifted to the east of the Change preposition
in
library
in between the self-service machines and adult fiction books
sections. Following
this
, children's
Correct article usage
the children's
books
room
converted
into Add a missing verb
was converted
lecture
Correct article usage
a lecture
room
.
From the entrance to the left
there was a reading Add a comma
left,
room
20 years ago which replaced
into Add a missing verb
was replaced
computer
Add an article
the computer
a computer
room
. The west side of the library
now have
a reference Change the verb form
has
books
portion. There was a computer games room
in
the north-west side of the Change preposition
on
library
which converted
into Add a missing verb
was converted
Storytelling
events Correct article usage
a Storytelling
room
and sofa
Correct article usage
a sofa
placed
in that Add a missing verb
was placed
room
for comfortable sitting for audience
. In Add an article
the audience
an audience
this
room
Children's fiction Add a comma
room,
books
section also
added for the Add a missing verb
was also
children's
.Change noun form
children
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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