The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.

The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.
The given charts demonstrate the
number
of
people
affected by four types of noise
pollution
day and night in urban and suburban
areas
in 2007.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that most
people
affected
Add a missing verb
were affected
show examples
by traffic in both types of
areas
in 2007.
However
, Industry
pollution
didn't have an impact on
people
during the year. As the
people
who
affected
Add a missing verb
were affected
show examples
by traffic
pollution
accounted for 60 in cities,
this
number
was 48 in rural
areas
.
Nevertheless
, other types of noise
pollution
didn't have an impact on
people
during the year. The rate of train
pollution
comprising by
Wrong verb form
comprises
show examples
nearly 20 and 18
people
in urban and suburban
areas
. There was a decrease
the
Change preposition
in the
show examples
number
of aircraft
pollution
in urban
areas
compared with the statistics of rural
areas
approximately 2
people
. The population that was affected by traffic increased
almost
Change preposition
by almost
show examples
12
people
in
daytime
Add an article
the daytime
show examples
. Since the
number
of train
pollution
accounted for around 9
people
in
daytime
Add an article
the daytime
show examples
, the rate of nighttime was 6.
Submitted by yusifakhmad on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, pollution, areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • number of people
  • affected by
  • types of noise pollution
  • cities
  • rural areas
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • daytime
  • nighttime
  • summarize
  • main findings
  • conclusion
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!