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Others believe that a women’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

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Since the beginning of history,
women
 have adopted the role of taking care of the house.
However
, in recent years, it has started the discussion of whether
women
 should stay at home or not. In
this
 essay, I will explain why
women
 should make the decision if they want to stay in their house or do something else. Nowadays
women
 have taken an important role in
any
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 types of jobs. They had occupied roles that were only for men in the
last
 centuries, like CEO, president, architecture, finance analyst, engineer and any type of job.
This
 is important because that means that not every woman wants to dedicate their life to washing dishes or cleaning the floor of their house. In my opinion, think that without
women
's participation in different
fields
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 we wouldn't have a lot of things that we have now, proof of
this
 is all of the inventions in scientific areas made by
women
, like Madame Curie, or amazing movies made by female directors like Greta Gerwig. As a woman, I definitely feel proud when I see
women
 taking part in many works where they were excluded in history. Everyone should decide what to dedicate their work to,
women
 in every part of the world should have the same rights as men and make the decision of what to do with their lives. To be clear, there is nothing wrong with staying at home and taking care of the children, but
that is
 a decision
women
 need to make, not society.
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