You are going on a short training course at a college in Sydney, Australia. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

Dear Sir and Madam, I am writing
this
email regarding my upcoming training
course
at your college in Sydney, Australia. I will
be arrive
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there before the
course
starts to attend the audio engineering
course
which will
between
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the 10th of October and the 30th of October. I am hoping you could assist me or recommend an accommodation for my study period. As an international student, I am not familiar with the place and the area in Sydney, I would appreciate that if you could find a private room for me, I am happy to live with either
local
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or different nationalities people which is a
share
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house would be a perfect option for me. In the room, if the space could include a bed, study desk, and internet connection that would be ideal for the rest of my study time. The time that I need for a room would be ideally before the
course
start which will be the 8th of October. I
also
like to rent
another
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month when my
course
ends to explore the city. So if the owner or an agency could offer me the extra month to rent it that would be much appreciated
it
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. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, MJ
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Provide more specific details about your situation, such as your budget or any particular preferences you have.
coherence cohesion
Consider using a more formal greeting and closing, such as 'Dear Accommodation Officer' and 'Yours sincerely'.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

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