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Please write about last holiday you should write how weather like, wat didi you do

#holiday #weather #wat #didi
Subject: Hello from
Dubai
. 28 March 10:23 Hi Ravina. We are having a really wonderful time here in the
Dubai
. We arriveat at the "Rixos premium
Dubai
" hotel and rented a two room apartment. It's got a swimming pool, wich is great because the weather is quite hot for March, but in the evening it's a little cool, we are wearing long sleeves because in March the weather in
Dubai
 changes very quickly. Today it's sunny and warm we are going to "Sheikh Zayed Mosque" there is so beautiful that words cannot describe it.
After
this
 we are going to the hypermarket but you know it's very expensive here. It's so noisy and fun here, I feel so comfortable here. Now I'm going to a dance show,
then
 we will take a walk in
Dubai
 at night. Only two days! See you soon. Love Iroda.
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