You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter -explain your situation -describe your problems -tell him/her when you think you can start

#job #week #employer #-explain #situation #-describe #-tell

Dear Mr. Smith, Hope

this

epistle finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

this

letter regarding my joining date at your prestigious organisation. Unfortunately, I have been having brutal kidney pain since

last

Monday.

However

, during cramps, I am not able to move and eat solid food. After X-rays and several blood tests, my family doctor informed me about a kidney stone in my left kidney.

Although

I am multi-task, I cannot manage my job and health issues simultaneously. As an immigrant, I have to take care of myself

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my own. I request you to extend my joining date.

According to

reports, my treatment will be done on Friday (25 October 2023).

Therefore

, I can start my job role on Monday (28 October 2023) after your approval.

In addition

, please find the attached reports for future reference. My apology for

this

inconvenience. I would really appreciate your efforts and consideration. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Alex

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

173 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Structure your letter

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