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Some people believe that products on animals should be banned, but others think that it is necessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #products #animals
There is no denying the fact that
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animals
 are crucial to the world and very important to our nature.
While
 it is commonly had to belief that, we should stop using
animals
 in our testing. There is
also
 an argument that it is for developing and producing new medicines in the future.
This
 essay will analyse
this
 topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, the ratio of used
animals
 in the testing process has increased throughout
this
 period.
In other words
,
this
 will decrease their life and lead to global issues
such
 as the lack of protein for society.
In addition
, as we live together and banding hunting any kind of
animals
 affects us whether
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 we notice it now or in the future.
On the other hand
, testing is very crucial. It is
also
 possible to say that, we could see a huge improvement in our health after producing and tasting so many chemicals before giving them to our pets.
Moreover
, so many
animals
 have nearly the same natural genes as humans and
this
 gives doctors more encouragement to explore more helpful medicines for us.
for instance
, mice and monkeys are
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important
animals
 in any testing process and
this
 is
due to
 their normal behaviours and lifestyle. In conclusion, there is no easy answer to
this
 question. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that, we should do anything to live a longer and healthier life, so putting limitations and permissions to any test to word. Any kind of animal is the key point to organise
this
 process. And
this
 by sharing strict taxes with anyone who did not care about animal's lives.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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