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Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
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The first pie chart depicts information about
pineapple
exports
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 quantity from
top
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the top
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 three
pineapple
-producing countries over a 10-year period, starting from 2009.
Second
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The second
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 graph illustrates data about the consumed amount of each
pineapple
 in 2019.
overall
 it can be seen that
the
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country
 A exported most highest number of tonnes of
pineapple
 than other countries.
Further
, Distribution &
retail
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and retail
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 cost is higher than any other sector. Looking at the data sets in more detail, it is evident that the proportions of
pineapple
 exports from
country
 A and
country
 C were 5 and 1 metric tonnes(
mt
) in 2009,
whereas
Country
 B dispatched 4.2
mt
.
However
, in 2019 the figure for
country
 A and C export quantity increased to 11
mt
 and 2
mt
. But
Country
 B dropped dramatically to 0.8
mt
 in 2019. Turning to the second pie chart data sets in more detail, it is shown that the Producer and Export costs consumed relatively lower than others, at around 5% and 4%. The cost of International transport, import licences, profit, and taxes consumption lies at 10% to 16%.
Last
 but not least, 35% cost by the distribution & retail.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, country, mt with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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