22.Some people think that too much attention and too many resources have been given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that excessive reserves, funds and other resources are used in the preservation of wildlife.

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essay agrees with

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statement because there are more important problems and

extinction

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the extinction

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of

animals

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can lead to the appearance of new

species

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. The main reason is that public money is limited, so

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should be used in more urgent

activities

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,

such

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as

the

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apply

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global warming.

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is because contamination and climate change are very serious problems that the planet is facing, solutions need to be found, if not, all living things in the

world

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will die.

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amount of money is needed

for getting

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to get

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the resources for finding solutions,

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that

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which

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is why funds should used more

in

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on

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these

activities

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than

in

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on

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protecting

animals

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.

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, in Europe, many

scientifics

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scientists

that are trying to look for solutions to reduce climate change and other catastrophes said that they have scarce resources to carry out in-depth

researchs

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research

, blocking the

posibility

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possibility

of advancement in the project. Another reason is that the disappearance of some

animals

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is not a disaster.

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is because the

world

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is changing every day, some things disappear and others are discovered. The planet itself is making changes in order to protect the

world

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, so some

adjustmnet

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adjustments

adjustment

need to be made. Individuals are afraid that the

extiction

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extinction

of some

animals

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could lead to harm

of

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to

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other

animals

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, but other

animals

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or new

species

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may appear and carry out

activities

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that are important for

the

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apply

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humans.

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, when dinosaurs disappeared, did not cause any harm to other

species

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on Earth, but new

species

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of

mamals

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mammals

had been

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found, leading to

expansion

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the expansion

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of

this

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type of animal around the

world

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. In conclusion, there are important difficulties that the

world

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faces that should be solved and the vanishing of some

animals

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can lead to a better

world

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, and

therefore

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, I believe that more supplies should be used

in

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for

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activities

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that are more important than protecting wildlife.