The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966,1986 and 2006
The bar chart illustrates the age of Australian women as
a
first-time Correct article usage
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mom
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moms
in
every 20 years from 1966 to 2006.
There was a downward trend in the Change preposition
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giving
birth percentage of women under 24 years old, Correct word choice
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while
there was an upward trend in the
figure Correct article usage
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of
25 above. It is notable that the group of 19 to 24 moms reached the highest in 1966, Change preposition
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otherwise
, the group of over 40 was
the lowest percentage in 1986.
In 1966, women between 19 to 24 Verb problem
had
year-old
had the greatest percentage of giving birth to the first child, at approximately 62%. In 2006, Correct your spelling
years old
this
figure decreased by over 30%, which became the third highest among six
groups.
The age between 30 and 34 rose significantly about 30%, Correct article usage
the six
became
the highest figure in 2006. Correct word choice
and became
Furthermore
, the first-time mom in
the age of 25 to 30 fluctuated in Change preposition
between
this
period but overally
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overall
increase
, from 38% to nearly 40%, reaching its Wrong verb form
increased
peaked
at 50% in 1986.Change the form of the verb
peak
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