Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.

Nowadays, individuals
are need
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to earn more income to
fullfil
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their requirements
therefore
they do not need to pay
taxes
to the
governement
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government
. I strongly agree with
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statement and my justification will come in
further
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paragraphs
along with
some relative examples. To commence with, there are several reasons why human beings
not
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need to pay
taxes
.
Firstly
, they put
extra
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hours and
hardwork
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hard work
to earn
money
hence
they should keep all the
money
for
their
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better future.
For instance
, sometimes any misshepling
occure
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occur
occurs
that
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time they easily
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their saving for any medical emergency and many more.
Secondly
, the living
expences
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of
todays
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lives are very costly to adjust
middle
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class to buy their dream house and car.
Thirdly
,
education
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system and
helathcare
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health care
both are very expensive to affordable poor people
therefore
they do not need to pay the government.
Furthermore
, individuals are less likely to pay
taxes
to the administration and
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their
saving
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savings
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in different fields
such
as education, healthcare and many more.
Moreover
, they need to some essential
requirement
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in their life to survive long.
On the other hand
, there are many advantages of paying
taxes
to the state. the
governement
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government
can easily provide them
better
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education, good health
infrastrure
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infrastructure
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and
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many more facilities.
Additionally
, the state can manage their economy and budget very easily with the help of the
money
which they
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received
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from the local public. To give an overview, folk should not pay
taxes
to the government because they need some extra
money
to survive long.
However
, the state should overcome
taxs
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tax
taxes
rates so all people can easily pay
taxes
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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