In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the next decades, there will be no need for drivers, since all vehicles will be autonomously driven. I adopt the stance that in
this
manner
car
accidents will gradually increase. On one hand,
automatic
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driving
car
has become a newly emerged trend that
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to facilitate
human's
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life.
In other words
,
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for prolonged periods ,without adequate sleeping hours, might lead to
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concentration, which, in turn, can cause serious
car
crashes, or even death.
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can be exemplified by an article published in
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Time Magazine which assumed that there is an annually increasing rate of mortality because of
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accidents, and the prime cause is deficiency in focusing.
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example shows that driverless vehicles could have a pivotal role in enhancing the safety standards of driving.
On the other hand
, despite the
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mentioned above, it can still be claimed that mechanic means of transportation do not have a conscious awareness of the
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, and
this
could lead to dire consequences. To illustrate, without fully understanding
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what is going on, these transportation means may not be able to
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the correct decision in a crucial moment. A prime example of
this
is
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driverless
car
, which placed many of its customers in a serious and
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situation because of inappropriate
descions
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decisions
the
car
sometimes made. What can be said here is that human consciousness is an important requirement to overcome
such
challenges.
To sum up
,
after
this
essay has reiterated the above-mentioned ideas, I am of the belief that
although
technological advancement has a pivotal impact on our lives,
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brain and capabilities remain critical for our survival.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous
  • driverless
  • human error
  • congestion
  • mobility
  • independence
  • energy-efficient
  • pollution
  • fossil fuel
  • economic impact
  • infrastructure
  • maintenance
  • insurance
  • psychological benefits
  • hacking
  • data privacy
  • ethical programming
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