Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

Many believe that the government should be in charge of taking care of a serious health problem, which is obesity in kids.

While

the rest of people think that it is the responsibility of parents, In

this

essay, I will argue both aspects and their views on

this

matter. On the one hand,

it is clear that

the authorities are part of the issue;

for example

, they allow shops to maintain foods with high calories and sell them out to teenagers and children. Ages 13 to 18 are the ages

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the body hormones get messed up and start to earn fat so easily, so not keeping an eye out for

centers

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and shops that vend

such

food

is a huge side of the problem.

Also

, the constant promotions of unhealthy foods,

such

as junk

food

, fizzy drinks, frozen meals, and sweets.

For instance

, whenever you are driving, big screens and signs show up, and all of them promote unhealthy foods. Unhealthful

food

can

also

be promoted throughout social media and platforms, and

this

could affect teens.

On the other hand

, fatness is

also

the parent's responsibility, and it depends on how they feed their kids and educate them about

food

and how to exercise properly.

Also

, some parents provide

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their kids

mobiles

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and playing devices without limiting their time, and

as a result

, younger people get lazy and don’t move a lot, which leads to being overweight.

To conclude

, obesity is a disease that can lead to problems in health and infectious diseases, and the number of overweight people keeps rising every day, so it is the

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and

government

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job to find a solution.