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you have recently went dubai and write a letter tour telling about it you r friend

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Today was an exciting and unforgettable day as I embarked on a trip to
Dubai
, a
city
 known for its stunning architecture, vibrant culture, and luxurious experiences. I started the day early, catching a flight that whisked me away to
this
 incredible destination. The view from the plane as we descended over the glittering
city
 was simply breathtaking. The first place I visited was the iconic Burj Khalifa, the tallest skyscraper in the world. Standing at its observation deck, I felt like I was on top of the world, with panoramic views of the
city
 stretching out beneath me. After that, I explored the historic Al Fahidi
neighborhood
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, with its charming wind-tower architecture and narrow alleyways. The
Dubai
 Museum provided a fascinating glimpse into the
city
's past, and I learned a lot about its transformation from a small fishing village to a global metropolis. In the afternoon, I ventured to the
Dubai
 Mall, a shopping paradise with countless stores and even an indoor ice rink. The evening was spent at the mesmerizing
Dubai
 Fountain show, where water danced to music and lights in front of the Burj Khalifa. The day ended with a delicious meal at a local restaurant,
savoring
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 the
flavors
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 of Middle Eastern cuisine.
Overall
,
this
 trip to
Dubai
 was a dream come true. The
city
's blend of tradition and modernity,
along with
 its hospitality, left me with memories I will cherish forever. I can't wait to explore more of
this
 incredible
city
 in the coming days. Until tomorrow, angel
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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