The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart illustrates the data regarding the
points
of three different
teams
between 2001 and 2004.
Overall
,
Team
B
consistently had the highest
score
throughout the period
while
the
points
of
Teams
A and
C
fluctuated.
To begin
, in 2002,
Team
A won 5
points
which was approximately 16 times lower than
Team
B
’s. The
score
of
Team
C
was twice that of
Team
A.
However
,
this
upward trend was abruptly broken and the
score
of
Team
B
plummeted dramatically, standing at 62
points
in 2003.
Nonetheless
,
team
B
maintained its leadership position, and slight changes were observed in
teams
A and
C
with an increase of around 5
points
. In 2004, there was a sharp rise in
Team
A’s
score
, as they gained 35
points
which was slightly lower than
Team
B
's gain of 8
points
.
Conversely
,
Team
C
lost its
points
and only stood at 12
points
.
Finally
,
Team
A showed a significant rise back reaching 55
points
,
while
Teams
A and
B
accounted for 8 and 5
points
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words points, teams, team, b, score, c with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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