The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart illustrates the data regarding the
points
of three different teams
between 2001 and 2004.
Overall
, Team
B
consistently had the highest score
throughout the period while
the points
of Teams
A and C
fluctuated.
To begin
, in 2002, Team
A won 5 points
which was approximately 16 times lower than Team
B
’s. The score
of Team
C
was twice that of Team
A. However
, this
upward trend was abruptly broken and the score
of Team
B
plummeted dramatically, standing at 62 points
in 2003. Nonetheless
, team
B
maintained its leadership position, and slight changes were observed in teams
A and C
with an increase of around 5 points
.
In 2004, there was a sharp rise in Team
A’s score
, as they gained 35 points
which was slightly lower than Team
B
's gain of 8 points
. Conversely
, Team
C
lost its points
and only stood at 12 points
. Finally
, Team
A showed a significant rise back reaching 55 points
, while
Teams
A and B
accounted for 8 and 5 points
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