Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion?
Many people argue, that the technological advancements of the modern age have brought men and women together, because of the
Internet
which made it possible to connect with people across borders.Use synonyms
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others say that, because of the Linking Words
Internet
people have become more secluded from their own family members, even though they live together in Use synonyms
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house. Use synonyms
This
essay is of the view, that the Linking Words
Internet
has brought more good to humans than bad.
On the Use synonyms
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hand, because of the advent of the online virtual world, many different applications came into existence. A few of them are TikTok and Facebook. Both of these applications have the potential of addiction and decrease the attention span of an individual. Use synonyms
For example
, as per Linking Words
one
scientific study, boys and girls between the ages of 16 to 22 years spend about 15 hours per day on TikTok and Facebook. Use synonyms
However
, in my opinion, because of the websites like Google and Bing, accessing important information has become very easy. Linking Words
Otherwise
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had to go to a library to get Use synonyms
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
Internet
has enabled the development of smart devices using which, persons who are living thousands of miles away from their loved ones are able to see their families at a click of a button. Use synonyms
This
is to say, that because of the video calling features, the family members were able to keep in touch with each other easily. Linking Words
For example
, During the 1990s Non-Resident Indians living in the United Arab Emirates used to write handwritten letters to their fathers, mothers, brothers, sisters and wives and send them by post which would reach their families after 7 to 10 days. Linking Words
However
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situation has changed completely because of the Linking Words
Internet
and mobile phones.
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To Conclude
, Technology like the Linking Words
Internet
has made it possible to connect with family members more easily than before and the harm of addiction to mobile screens is less than the benefit.Use synonyms
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